Bloodclan's Reign

(v.2)
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A long time ago, I wrote a story called "Bloodclan's Reign." It has the exact same title as this one does, but this one isn't the same.
I wrote . . . what I consider now to be horrible and cringeworthy, chapters, and published them onto this website.
Now, I want to see if I can ever improve upon this, or if this will go into the recycling bin for eternity.
Give me feedback, don't be a silent reader, and most importantly, give me critiques! I want to know what you thought could have happened.
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In Warriors, the good successfully defeated evil with a power of loyalty to Starclan.
This was most notable in The Darkest Hour, where Lionclan and Bloodclan battle.
Now, this is where my story begins.
The entire Warriors series can easily be changed by the death of Firestar.
And that is what happens in this book.
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