A serendipitous love

This is not one of those stories where the guy leaves the girl, this is one of those stories where the girl falls in love with her best friend, and he, with her. Then, with all that they've made for themselves, they're forced to make some difficult decisions that could potentially ruin them.
Analise Rea Mathews was raised in the bustling town of Charleston, West Virginia. She now resides in Jackson, Mississippi. Being thirty-two, she can still remember how the love of her life, and her, had to overcome many challenges after her first child at only nineteen here's her story...

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