Critical Role: A Promise Kept
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This is a fan fiction based on the characters created in the Geek and Sundry twitch channel show Critical Role. It streams live every week and you should check it out.
https://www.twitch.tv/criticalrole
If you enjoy it please vote, that's how I'm determining actual interest to motivate me to write more of the storyline. Also this is taking place in-between the Craighammer and Blackwoods story arcs. The story begins after they get home from Vasselheim and I'm adding in a few weeks so my story fits in the timeline.
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