Rise of the Broken

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Running from the things that broke them, two children ran into the Forest of Secrets, not knowing that they would find. Can these two children make it out alive? Will their hearts ever heal from the pain they've had to endure? And can they rise above their past while making their future brighter?
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"You want to run, when you know that there's something here that is trying to control forest? You know we should help the wild stay just that, wild!" I say, trying to make him understand that we need to stay here and help protect the forests secrets. The enemy can't find out, it would destroy the forest that I now thought of as home.

"What can we do we're just two kids in way over our heads! We cant do ANYTHING!" He replies, anguish in his voice. I could see it in his eyes that he truly wanted to help but he was too afraid to try, he didn't want to break any further, he didn't want me to break (again).
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AN: Please comment and criticize. If you don't like the story please tell me why in the comments because I want to become a better writer. Thanks.All Rights Reserved

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