Rise of the Broken

Rise of the Broken

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Running from the things that broke them, two children ran into the Forest of Secrets, not knowing that they would find. Can these two children make it out alive? Will their hearts ever heal from the pain they've had to endure? And can they rise above their past while making their future brighter? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "You want to run, when you know that there's something here that is trying to control forest? You know we should help the wild stay just that, wild!" I say, trying to make him understand that we need to stay here and help protect the forests secrets. The enemy can't find out, it would destroy the forest that I now thought of as home. "What can we do we're just two kids in way over our heads! We cant do ANYTHING!" He replies, anguish in his voice. I could see it in his eyes that he truly wanted to help but he was too afraid to try, he didn't want to break any further, he didn't want me to break (again). ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ AN: Please comment and criticize. If you don't like the story please tell me why in the comments because I want to become a better writer. Thanks.
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She....I....... I was running through the thick branches, pushing the leaves out of my way with all my might. I had to get away. The wet, brown, ground made it easier for me to slip and let her red, chilling hands slip around my innocent, scarred body, not knowing where she would take me next. I was almost out of breath, but I had to keep running if I wanted to make it out of this forest alive. My red dress was getting torn to shreds, and my hands and feet had mud all over them. My long, bushy brown hair was getting hooked on every possible branch, making me push my hair in the back of my dress, just like I used to when I was forced to cook everyday for my loathsome 'parents'. Returning back to the real world, I had to stop otherwise I would black out. I took a few seconds to catch my breath silently, and to look around to see if she was there behind me. I was looking up at the tall, old tree when I heard a twig snap behind me. Just like in the horror films. I turned and ran in the same direction, not daring to look back and see her wretched face fixed on my body. I sprinted and sprinted, but slowed down when I saw I was heading to nowhere but a ragged cliff. The unknown would me known if I continued to run and jump. I stopped two metres away from the cliff and looked down to see a valley so far down. If I jump..... I die. If I let her take me..... the unfair horribleness awaits me. I had no choice. I jumped.

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