A War In My Head

so this is my very first work being posted on wattpad. yeah, hi i am new and completely clueless as to how wattpad works.( i can be really dumb when it comes to computers) so i would love it if u guys could help me..maybe by adding me as a friend(thats what we do right? :\) and also commenting as to how do u think my poem is..AND in case u liked it maybe like..?? :D