Light and Darkness - the story of two werewolves

That is a story about girl Moon and boy Rain, members of different werewolf packs. One day they meet each other and fall in love on first sight. but their love is forbidden becouse those packs hate each other. will they find the way to be together or will the loyality to pack destroy their love?
This story is short version if a book I'm writing so please let me know
what you think about it :)
Btw sory for mistakes