Under Radar
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Ongoing42m
Last published Fri, Jan 24, 2014
"Almost there," I whispered out. My voice wearing down with the exercise I was making my body do. I reached out a hand, almost as if I was about to grab the sweet sign that let me know I was going to survive. My feet ached and just as I was about to leap out into the open world I tripped and fell to the ground, hitting my head off the cold, chilling surface. I blacked out for a second and when my vision returned I was being dragged back into the woods.
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