Inferno
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Kumpleto Sat, Oct 1, 2016<5 min
A three-part prose poem from my upcoming novel. I need a little bit of help finding any flaws in these poems. They don't necessarily have the exact same rhythm dynamic, but all surround the same subject matter; sentient fire.
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