Chosen- CCA Super Special

So a long time ago, unsatisfied with the level of detail and plot provided by Jessica Burkhart's Chosen, I decided to write my own version. I only wrote a little bit of it, but I figured I would post some of it to see if there was any interest. It's one one of the less unbearable childhood writing attempts of mine, so we'll see how you like it. Please bear in mind that that I wrote this around age 13, so it's definitely no literary masterpiece. It's unlikely that I will return to write more, but that could change. Against my better judgment, I will post this for all to see!