Starships

Okay. So, I lost a bet. I have to write a book, about- yeah. I have to write a book about a fictional universe type thing. I came up with a bunch of weird names, looks, a draft plot so imma see how it goes.

(Please don't judge the names because part of the bet was to come up with the funniest or weirdest names I could. So here we go.)
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Narptuon is the captain of his fathers ship. His crewmen are helping him recruit new members and things are not going so well. Benk is his first in line and is the most loyal the ship has ever seen. He worked with Narptuon's father. Things have been weird the past year, after destroying Zork's ship with him and all of his disgusting villain minions on it. Benk is away more often, taking longer on fuel trips, but Narptuon convinces himself it's just because Benk is getting older.
Is he right?

-ok. I'm not the best at writing so I appreciate feedback as long as you don't put nasty comments. Thanks-