Both Perspectives
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Last published Tue, Mar 27, 2018
In life, there are two perspectives on every story, usually two opposing mindsets to every situation. One side is positive, bright and full of hope and the other side is usually negative, dark and filled with despair. It just all depends on the person's past experience with the deciding viewpoint.
Meet December Hail, an ordinary girl who believes that love was invented by desperate, lonely human beings who wanted to find something worth living for in life than just simply living. Meet her polar opposite, Finn Carico, a hopelessly romantic boy who believes that love is one the greatest feelings in the world and that without love human civilization cannot survive, let alone flourish. Follow Finn into the gloomy somber abyss of December's mind as he struggles to change her perspective on love. Will he accomplish this seemingly hopeless endeavor or will December corrupt him first?
*It sounds cliche, but I swear it isn't*
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