Jack and Friends' Adventures: Beta Reader Preview
- Reads 63
- Votes 4
- Parts 6
In a world corrupted by bandits, one man has decided to form a team to stop them all. But as each of the members come together for their first meet up, a dangerous monster strikes. Who is this new threat and what are their motives?
This story is a preview to the novel i'm currently writing called, "Jack and Friends' Adventures".
All Rights Reserved
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
You may also like
Fusion
The story of a guy with extraordinary abilities and extraordinary problems. He meets friends, enemies, and loses a bit of each. I enjoy writing and drawing comic books and making my own heroes and villains and I wanted to see how turning my favorite hero into a book would turn out. Feel free to give feedback, it always helps. Jack Carter is your semi-average guy. Sixteen, 5' 11, charcoal black hair, and a slight muscle build. The rich popular kid that everyone adores. Until his life takes a turn for the better and worse. Sure, the move was bad. A whole new city across the country. The Big freakin' Apple. Then there was the fact that he had to leave all his friends and make new ones. Double bummer. But juggling his new abilities and super villains? Now there's the ride of a lifetime.Complete
A Tale of Tethering Hearts
Fate doesn't care if they hate; when two hearts are bound, even their own defiance cannot keep them from meeting. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . They could never stand each other. She despised him. And he hated the very idea of even thinking about her. Every meeting between them felt like a wildfire-intense, uncontrollable, destined to burn everything in its path. But who knew that very fire would one day rise into the sky like a lantern, turning hate into something they could never escape-love. ➽ She was kind-hearted-willing to burn herself just to bring light to others. ➽ He was merciless-ready to burn the whole world for himself and his own. ➽ She was soft, understanding. ➽ He was ruthless, incapable of understanding anyone but himself. Two souls on opposite ends, tied by fate. But when she discovers the truth about him-his darkest reality-will her love survive? And when he uncovers who she truly is... will he still be able to love her, or will his heart remain chained to hate? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Tropes: ➶ Hate to Love ➶ Opposites Attract ➶ Hidden Identity / Double Life ➶ Vigilante Justice / Revenge ➶ Secrets & Lies ➶ Slow Burn ➶ Fated Love / Destined Hearts
The Nerd's Secret |Ongoing|
Note: I don't believe you need to read the first book but I think it'd be more fun if you did. (The Bad Boy's Secret) This story may be triggering at some points. If you have any questions regarding that please don't hesitate to message me. When you're a loser and friendless nerd you stick to what you're supposed to do. You get good grades, deal with the bullying and attempt to forget the past. But there are things an everyday nerd, such as myself should clearly not do. One: Don't crush on the most popular girl in school. Two: Be sure not to get sidetracked in your studies by including yourself in electives and such. Three: Don't get superpowers. Now what to do when, possibly, you might have done all the following listed above? This wasn't like a test where I just knew the answer. So you can imagine how long it took me to come up with the realization of what I should become. Or in other words, who I should become! Maybe I shouldn't have been begging for a change because this is a bit much...
Labyrinth Legacy- 3 - THE LAST WAR
Hope you read part one and two. In the aftermath of the devastating events that shattered their bonds, the team stands fractured, each member grappling with their own demons and doubts. Once united by a shared purpose, they now drift apart, haunted by loss and the weight of their failures. Yet Gareth, refuses to let despair dictate their fate. Determined to reunite his fractured family, he embarks on a quest to reignite their fighting spirit, knowing that an even greater battle looms on the horizon. With time running out, Gareth must confront not only the external threats that await but also the internal conflicts that threaten to tear them apart for good. As he reaches out to his estranged allies, the path to redemption becomes clear: they must come together one last time to face the darkness ahead. Will they rise to the challenge, or will the final war claim them all?Complete
HELLBOUND NIGHTFRIGHT
⚠️read description before reading⚠️ ⚠️⚠️⚠️Warning ⚠️⚠️⚠️ This story includes cursing, gore, self harm, bullying, LGBT, words that might be offensive and more that readers may not want to read.Characters in the story are not fictional so as some locations that are written. This story is inspired by the author's sleeping problems, family history, myths, rumors she has heard and stories. Characters are meant to reflect the author's friends in her perspective. Plots in the story are from the author's nightmares, real life and imagination. It is suggested for readers to be prepared for twists and turns in the story. Description: there was a 13 years old girl who currently lost her friend group because of a replacement, but due to a weird chat from her cousin and a convo with her fashion designing teammate , she then found herself in a new environment. Having fun ,she didn't notice that ber-months was near and her hell season would start soon. As the first night of September strikes, her mares then begun. She was used to it but something felt off. Little did she know...The worst would start soon...As days passed, the unusual starts to happen .Suddenly one night she then found herself running away with companions from inhumane creatures. Finding them selves trapped in this twisted realm with no hope, the squad went on a search to find ways to escape this phenomenon. Every time midnight strikes they struggled to survive, they are confronted with their worst fears and must face the darkness within themselves to escape. Along the way, they must also evade the nightmarish entities that lurk in the shadows, waiting to ensnare them in their twisted realm. Will they escape? and would they survive? PS. please do not bother my friends social media and my English kinda sucks.
Super (Part 4): Senior Year, The War
The war begins, and this time with some frightening new enemies and some new friends to accompany Able and his friends. What will they do to stop this war? Will they perish or flourish? Who will die, and who will live?Complete
Decaying Eminence
🏆 #1 African Fantasy | ⚡ #1 Shonen In a kingdom where power is measured by bloodline and cosmic radiation, Moto has neither. Just smoke, a secret he won't share, and a goal most people would call impossible- peace that outlives the person who fights for it. Alongside Sheu, a wind-user carrying buried grief, and Najo, a lightning heir broken by his own family, he begins to see what the kingdom doesn't want seen: every system built to protect people is already decaying. Dark shonen fantasy rooted in Shona language and Zimbabwean culture. 103 chapters. Four canonical companion volumes. Disclaimer: AI used for grammar, spelling and punctuation only.Complete
PSYCHOSIS
In a world where people with superpowers exist 2 friends unknown to them find themselves tangled between hate .The urge to keep their friendship is strong but will it be enough?Secrets come to the surface as they try to navigate their lifes through changes.Follow their story and learn. *Hello this is my first story ever so be kind ,it started as a joke with my friend at summer and now here we are.I appreciate everyone how decided to give a try to my story no matter if you are a silent reader or not .I tried to do a good job but keep in mind that I am really from Greece and English is not my frist language so mistakes may exist.Complete
Labyrinth Legacy- ONE - Formation Of The Squad
In a world much like our own, nine young men and women live ordinary lives, unaware of the extraordinary powers lying dormant within them. Each possesses a unique ability, but it isn't until a fateful event reveals the truth that their destinies intertwine. As they grapple with their newfound powers, they discover a shared purpose: they are the chosen guardians, destined to confront a looming darkness threatening to engulf the world. Bound by fate and the weight of their responsibilities, these unlikely heroes must learn to harness their abilities and work together. As they embark on this perilous journey, they will face challenges that test not only their powers but also their bonds of friendship. With time running out and the fate of humanity at stake, can they rise to the occasion and fulfill their destiny? The adventure begins as they step into a world where courage, sacrifice, and the strength of their unity will determine the future of all.Complete
PvP Wars - Reckoning
In this book of Pvp Wars, a new threat arrives, stronger and more powerful then ever before Our heroes revolve around a young adult Jr and Zombie, a duo who had been friends since childhood On their journey they will discover powers and energies far beyond their own, and they will embark on a quest to save the universe of this new threat with the help of some people they meet along the way Will the duo be able to stop them? Will they grow as people and be able to stop this new threat? Find out in Pvp Wars Recknoning - This book is based off a series that was already undergoing, a prequel may be devised if this garners attention, however these characters backstorys will be revealed later on in the series The book can be read without knowing their origin, however it may be confusing on some parts which I apologize for, overall still a good read if youre interested. This is the first book im writing so please mind bad storytelling elements, this is also sort of an experiment to tie a greater storyline together, this book isnt the first thing to happen in the timeline as ive stated before Enjoy!Complete
The story of a guy with extraordinary abilities and extraordinary problems. He meets friends, enemies, and loses a bit of each. I enjoy writing and drawing comic books and making my own heroes and villains and I wanted to see how turning my favorite hero into a book would turn out. Feel free to give feedback, it always helps. Jack Carter is your semi-average guy. Sixteen, 5' 11, charcoal black hair, and a slight muscle build. The rich popular kid that everyone adores. Until his life takes a turn for the better and worse. Sure, the move was bad. A whole new city across the country. The Big freakin' Apple. Then there was the fact that he had to leave all his friends and make new ones. Double bummer. But juggling his new abilities and super villains? Now there's the ride of a lifetime.
More detailsContent Guidelines