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Complete, First published Sep 28, 2013
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// "And in those small moments, holding him was the only thing that mattered, because the world felt far too big and I was hopelessly lost." // 

After her alcoholic mom left their family 12 years ago without a real reason, homeschooled Gable Marrow tries to find herself among the rubble. 

But all she finds is the patheticness of herself. 

For example, she hasn't seen her reflection in over 10 years, spends her free time re-watching episodes of Friends, while her only friend is a seventy year old British man who she calls her Teacher. 

But when the impossibly beautiful Jacoby Winters shows up on her doorstep one stupid night, she see things in a whole new perspective. Will this be the start of something new? 

This is her pathetic tale of hope, new friendship, and first love- a coming of age story about getting through life even though life may not seem to be worth living.
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An internal voice whispered, "Call him." But I chose not to. I dismissed it once more, saying, "He never liked me anyway." Yet the dilemma lingered. "But maybe he does. The way he looks at you... it's different." Out of nowhere, he glanced my way. My heartbeat quickened, sending shivers down my spine. I averted my gaze, pretending to look around. "Has he noticed me? No, wait-oh my god." --- After switching high schools, Nina discovered a new way of life. She fell in love, made wonderful friends, and everything seemed perfect. But Ethan-a popular boy who never focused on anyone but her-was the object of her hatred. He was always there, always keeping her safe. He used to annoy her endlessly. She hated him deeply. Until she didn't. For a while, she was content with her high school experience. That is, until something mysterious turned her world upside down. Forced to move to a new city, Nina had to cut ties with everyone she once knew. Eight years later, fate brings her face-to-face with him again. "Ethan..." He's the key to everything-the truths she never knew. When she was lost in the dark, he always held the light. But now, things are different. She despises him. He's colder than ever. Or perhaps she fears him. Fears that he'll leave her again. Will their lives ever return to normal after everything they've endured? "Maybe?" "Maybe yes. Maybe no?" --- Started: 8 November 2021 Ended: 19 December 2022 Rewritten: December 2024 --- ### Rankings Goals So Far: #1 Adolescente #1 given up #1 blinddates #1 pretend #10 twistedromance #50 high school romance --- ### Notice: This is my first published story, and it contains numerous grammatical errors and bad editing. If you're interested in the storyline, please don't judge me too harshly based on this book. Better stories are on the way-I'm still learning and improving every day. Enjoy! ✨