Broken Souls
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Last published Sun, Aug 20, 2017
The people classify them as "Broken Souls". However, their souls are far from broken. I guess us humans just don't care enough to take a look, to dig a little deeper.
Athena Hazeldine is born with an extraordinary gift. But, many call it a curse. No matter where she goes, everyone talks about "Broken Souls". Nobody knows who they are and what they do. Some believe they don't exist. Nobody ever thought that they would be talking to a broken soul, nevermind seeing one.
Humans are such lying creatures, but so trusting at the same time. We believe a lot of things we hear. A thought never crossed anyone's mind to take a look for themselves. To find out for themselves.
Except for one girl.
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AUTHOR NOTE THING:
Why hello there.....
So, I'm going to try writing something a little bit different. I'm going to give a warning right now. A lot of you may be confused from a chapter or two that you're (hopefully) going to read in the future. Which is okay. Everything will (again.. hopefully) seem crystal clear at the end. I will try to make the story mysterious but not so confusing. However, when I write, I'm usually pretty confused myself... ahaha maybe I should fix that.
Have fun reading! (May or may not freak you out..... I don't know)
There most likely are going to be some paranormal/scary moments in this story.
See ya, Bye!
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