My Last Breath Going Under
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MatureOngoing7m
Last published Mon, Nov 11, 2013
Jake Bow is a smart and creatively talented 16 year old boy. He'll try his best to help everything and anyone he can. He is a straight A student and an art protégé and never goes anywhere without his notebook.
Now there seems to be nothing wrong with this boy right? He must have tons of friends. Wrong. Jake Bow is considered a "nobody". But they don't know his story, so he doesn't bother with the names they call or the rumors they'll spread about him.
He does however have one friend that has been with him since childhood, never once left his side. A brother if you will, his name Luke Weissman.
After all he's been through he still wears a smile upon his face, he's brave and courage's. That must be why someone would want to take him. On Friday October 13 Jake Bow was taken from his daily life. Possibly to never be seen again.
That's Luke and Jake on the cover only because I couldn't upload a pic of Luke :P but that's them :)
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