A Breaking Dawn Re-write
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  • Parts 17
  • Time 1h 54m
Ongoing, First published Jan 29, 2012
What if?
What if Bree Tanner had lived?
What if she had been given a second chance?

I wrote this in 2012. I am pretty proud of this. I hope you enjoy it.

A rewrite of Breaking Dawn because i didn't like it and it sucked and i wanted Bree to live and I always wanted to know what happened to Diego. So I just made it up. 
Bree, Bella, Ed, all the Cullens, the wolves, the newborns and the members of the Volturi guard do NOT BELONG TO ME.  Also any other face you recognize from the Twilight series doesn't belong to me.  Which also includes the covens of vampires, renesmee, bella's parents, and the sparkliness of the vampires (i would so kill that if this was my book...)
I own a select few characters in this book namely Cameron and Winona (right off the top of my head).

I'm going to try to update this maybe once or twice a week.  I will do my best.  The more you comment the more likely I am to remember.  After all it was the comments that ended up bringing me back.

Also casting suggestions and like playlist suggestions are appreciated.  I have a playlist but I made it when I was like 12 or 13 so it's kind of just like whatever my favorite songs were when I was listening to this (it was a lot of like alt/emo rock like p!atd, Cute is What we Aim For, etch). So leave me a comment and let me know what you think about this kind of stuff.
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