wish i could

hey y'all. it is my first time writing a book, and i am still learning, but i am exited to give it a shot. i would love tips ideas or comments so feel free to read it and tell me what you think. it is not completed yet and it has a few mistakes (a lot of mistakes) but i would love to see it grow.

after the downfall. a girl and her brother are left to fend for themselves in the forgotten world. she has raised her brother after her parents died, and she has done unspeakable things to get by. now her, her brother, and their strange travel pet will have to find their way across this wasteland. will she be able to forget about what happened at borderline? will the world ever be the same? will they find a way to move on? find out..