My contest entry for Lemongirl11, It's not completely finished yet but I posted it just to see the reaction to my it.
Please read it and give me any criticism you'd think would improve my writing.
Also contact Lemongirl11 about the contest, I don't own the plot all I did was rewrite it.
Thank you.
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Hello this is my first story i ever made, im not so good at english so please try to understand what im writing and no need to tell me if i misspell. It might be a lemon.