Unsaid Feelings

Hey, I'm new to wattpad and basically I'll be using this for my personal poetry and love stories.
This might sound crazy, but here I'll be confessing my feelings to the girl that I love but should remain unsaid.
I know words may get her, but it could take time and when that day comes, we may not even be friends or that she'll be married to the man she loves.

Well, I'm new to this kind of art - the poetry thingy, but I accept critics and/or some sort of advice that can help me improve this new type of artwork, or let's just say another covertness way of expressing my feelings.