Girl in the Red Sweater
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(This was a short story assignment for my English class. I worked really hard on it! Sorry if the format's kinda weird btw. Please grade me from A-F in the comments so then I can know what my outcome might be! This story is copyrighted by me, so it's an ILurvUz Production)
Nathan wants more in life but can't seem to find it. So he's stuck with normal and hates everything about it. But a strange girl in a unusually red sweater comes along and makes him see the color in the world. But with beauty comes sadness.
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