Turbulence (Writing Excersise)
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Hi. So this was originally starting out as a full book, but that ended up being short lived. I lost inspiration for this and could not figure out a way to continue it as I feel like I wrote too much in the beginning. But I would appreciate any feedback in terms of my writing style! Thx
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