What he wants

Ryder Hamilton is the hottest boy in school, with his dark brown hair and melting blue eyes he could charm even the devil into bed with him but he was getting bored he wanted something new and the moment he saw her staring in the mirror admiring herself he knew the only thing he wanted was her.
Then she came in...
Chloè Brew-Daniels. She waltzed into a new school and did not expect to be frustrated by Ryder. She's a classic sarcastic mean girl who is into shopping and pink and would not care if the rest of the world were to jump into the Mediterranean ocean as long as she had her dads credit card.

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"Questions darling, you ask too many of them"he said in a husky voice
"Stupidity dummy, you have too much of it"she whispered in her thick jersey accent.

If only he knew how unsettled his voice was making her. His dark blue eyes making irresistible wild thoughts fly through her mind only for a second. She pushed him of her and retreated down the hallway with her head held high and her Jimmy Choos broken.

$this is my first book, so just give it a shot, all constructive criticism is allowed