Forgotten Portrait

Based on the game Ib, Forgotten Portrait is a fan fiction I have in progress.

Nine years after the events of Ib, Ibara returns to the art gallery after discovering that the Guertena exhibit is back in town. There she meets a familiar blond that ends up dragging her back into the Fabricated World that she escaped nine years before. She uses this to her advantage and uses the opportunity to rescue Garry and seal Mary back into the painted world, forever.

Please, feel free to comment expressing your likes or dislikes about the story. I'm open to criticism, but don't hate on the story just to be a hater. There's a difference between criticizing a story and just bashing it because you don't like it.