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Going under

Going under

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Wed, Nov 2, 2016
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Horror
It was a normal day until it hit midnight I was in my bed watching Liv and Maddie when I really should've been asleep. I started to dose off when all of this sudden I heard a noise I walked towards the kitchen as I got closer a rotten scent started coming out of no where. I looked around checking if my mom was home yet usually on Thursdays she has a double shift I. I started to walk towards the living room when I heard a knock on the door I put my soft fuzzy slippers on and checked who it was there nobody I kept walking when I was at a stop sign I saw a shadow saying my name "Amirah" the tone was raspy and faint as if they had been smoking cigarettes all there life. I started to see fog coming near me the shadow was in it saying watch your back. But for what I wondered? so I asked it who should I watch my back on and he said a close friend the only person I could think off was my best friend Zirah. When I was thinking the shadow grabbed my hand and I was going under the grass the moist soil up against my skin the bugs crawling all over me I was petrified screaming but no one could here me my voice it was growing in a whisper no matter how hard I kicked and punched the shadow wouldn't let me go, and here I was never to be seen again I would watch others who could not see me and I was missing DOWN UNDER!!!
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It was like any other day, i was with my daughter, amelia. She was about to fall sleep. She was in so much peace. No worry in the world. Her green eyes were shining, from the light of the moon. They slowly closed, and she drifted off into her soft snoring. For a 3 year old, she sure knows how to mess with your heart. I felt so bad. Her father left. Well, my husband found somebody better i guess. We had her when i was 20, and he left when she was only 4 months old. What a life. During my deep thinkink, the tv stated making that fog horn type noise, waking me up from my trance. The news was on, with the alert reading across the screen. "TAKE COVER, STAY IN HOMES. LOCK DOORS, STAY AWAY FROM WINDOWS" i lay amelia in her bed, out of my lap. I lock the windows and the doors. When i came back, i missed whatever the alert was about...i should have waited. That mistake changed my life forever...

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