Diary of a Psycho Review
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  • Parts 5
  • Time <5 mins
  • Reads 98
  • Votes 11
  • Parts 5
  • Time <5 mins
Ongoing, First published Nov 02, 2016
Hey guys. TheIncompatibleMan here with another review. This is (obviously) a review for TheLostMarvel's story "Diary of a Psycho".

I will be looking at the plot, grammar, and the length of the book.

Keep in mind that these are my personal thoughts and critiques. Also don't forget that there are bound to be SPOILERS!
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