The New Inmate

The New Inmate

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After a year in Aeston's Juvenile correction center Dakota Rae has had enough he wants to get out and the new inmate that arrived might just be the person to get him out. This is my year 10 character description assignment their will be no more posts this is just a one off chapter. Please read it an give some feedback on what I could improve on for next year it would be really appreciated.
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A boy struggling into days society, making a change to his community and making the reservation life a better place to live. The future is looking bright for the Indigenous people. I was told to add more chapters to this story, I am going to re-read my handwritten copy and see if I can add more chapters to it.

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