Enlisted: a short story

Enlisted: a short story

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My teacher gave us this for our first project. The first page had to be sensory detail, the second had to be dialogue, the last page had to conclude the story in a way. We couldn't go past the three pages though. Give me feedback, be as brutal as you want, I like to be critiqued!
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First Page!:) -------- Hi, I just wanted to say that this was one of my first stories I've ever written and it's kinda horrible but you guys seem to enjoy it. But please know that if things don't make sense it's because I made this like seven years ago which is a pretty long time and my writing has definitely gotten better but this was just a warning. Read at the risk of reading a thirteen year-old's writing. Enjoy.

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