Enlisted: a short story
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Complete Thu, Nov 3, 20165m
My teacher gave us this for our first project. The first page had to be sensory detail, the second had to be dialogue, the last page had to conclude the story in a way. We couldn't go past the three pages though. Give me feedback, be as brutal as you want, I like to be critiqued!
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