My Unknown Mate

I used to work at a karaoke bar in Gold Coast but he took that away from me. He took a lot away from me. My family, my friends and my independence.
Or at least he thinks he has.
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Everything I do for her just keeps going wrong. The one night I was caught up at work, she got attacked. Its all my fault.
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WARNING: Violence, sex and BAD LANGUAGE are present in this story if You don't like it then don't read it.
Okay well this is my first book. Please tell me honestly how much you like it or dislike it I am open to criticism. This is unedited but I will try my best with spelling and punctuation.