Jack
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This story is going to be nowhere near as good as any of miz's stories, but I'll try! If you have any ideas at all, please let me know !! Anyways, this is a story about a boy named Jack. He's supposedly a genius, but he can't remember anything from his past life. Every time the scientists he's being held by put him to sleep, he meets Mia, his supposed ex-girlfriend from "before the war", she says.. She is furious with him for what he did, and even more furious since he doesn't remember. Anyways, please give me feedback on my writing, I want this to be good!!!!
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