Donuts-Cupcakes Spoof

I read the MLP Creepypasta "Cupcakes" and thought, "hmm, if i could write a story on Wattpad, i may as well start with something different, yet highly familiar." So here I am with a story. This is my first story ever on Wattpad, so please let me know what i could change to make this and my future stories better. Please follow me, it really helps me out, and enjoy. :)