The devils work

A man who is a prince and looking for a princes, he gets taken to a place he don't recognise, he soon finds out the forbidden deal with the devil that he soon will regret his mum doing. Hi, i'm 20 years old,I'm a criminology with psychology student and in my spare time I decided to write a story, so I hope you enjoy :)
I know my grammar is poor but I'm just doing it for fun, if someone wants to hate just don't bother reading it, if you don't like it.
it's something I like doing, if you want me to add more to my story don't be shy and drop a comment, and add suggestions on what you think should happen next, I love different ideas it's good to have some ideas, anyways enough of me babbling on, I hope you enjoy this.