I hate your blue eyes
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Max is the school jock as cliche as it sounds he's the popular player , or everyone thought he was , but no one really knew the real him . He was definitely not what everyone thought he was for instance he never slept with almost all the girls in school . Only one person knew the real him but he couldn't let anyone know. That girl was Danielle, his ex best friend.
They were the best of friends for years and then high school came along. Danielle thought Max had loved her because she did so she told him, that's where it went downhill. He laughed in her face and said they would never be more than friends.
But what happens when it's one of the secrets she doesn't know about and he was too scared to say anything.
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