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Make You Mine [Un-edited Version]

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Time 11h 53m

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"I've been watching you, waiting for you, and wanting you for so long. Now I have a chance. A chance to love you, hold you, and be with you.  A chance for us to spend the rest of our lives together. A chance to make you mine." - Ian Hunt


Not a typical love story, but a twisted love story.



Not a Vampire story. 



Also Rated R for strong language and sexual content. This is the un-edited version so it has mistakes. I posted the edited version but if you still choose to read this then  please do your best. Again,  thanks for reading and enjoy MYM! :) 
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captive captor fiction gruesome kidnapped mystery obsessed other psycho sexual stalked stalker taken texttospeech thriller victim violence

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You Are Ours by CeeCee_Henry85

IF YOU ARE NOT OVER 18YRS OLD - THIS STORY IS NOT FOR YOU! At thirteen Ryan Blake moves to California from London, England. Her dad gets a new promotion so that means her whole life has to move across to the other side of the world to his new job; a new job for him - a new school, new friends & new enemies for her. Her family love the idea of a new life in a different country but not Ryan. She's shy, withdrawn & hates meeting new people. When she's introduced to the new family next door, Mrs Greyson introduces her eldest son, Noah but then mentions her two other children & she calls the "her terrors". The thought of living next door to two siblings, who even their mother calls terrors freights her & makes her feel uneasy. But Ryan never expected the Greyson brothers to be the the older brother companionship she didn't know she needed. They are more than close, despite the five & six year age gap between them. They care for her like family & are always there for her no matter what, they just want what's best for her. When she returns from college a few years later, after not being home for two years the boys are no longer boys, they are now both men & now Ryan is too no longer a girl - blossomed into a beautiful young women, the brothers see how far she has come from being the shy teenager next door, to a beautiful, young, confident women. A women they have both loved for years. A women they both want. A women that they claim as 'Ours'. "Patience princess, we both want a taste, the more we tease you, the wetter you are... the better you'll taste," Nico says, his wet hot tongue tracing a line up my throat. I look at him with confusion & watch as his hand trails down the rest of me, tugging at the band of my panties. "W-we?" I whisper. "You didn't think I'd let him have all the fun alone, did you beautiful?" Nates voice says. I look to the left of me & there he is - Nate, laying down with his elbow propped up supporting him while he watches Rank- *1 #share

Taken Captive by RTEUYTAT

I wrote this when I was 16 give me a break. TAKEN SERIES: BOOK ONE TW: kidnapping, manipulation, toxic/abusive relationship, violence, death, grief, self-harm, suicidal thoughts/attempts, sexual assault, non-consensual sexual content, alcoholism, stockholm syndrome, switching partners, etc. Do not read this story if you get triggered easily. If you decide to continue, that's your own choice. This story will portray a BDSM relationship, NOT counting the toxicity and genuine abuse that goes on throughout it. Do not comment anything unnecessarily judgmental, especially if you don't know what you're talking about. Thank you, enjoy. - - - - - "Don't ever do something like that again, or I will kill you, understood? "Yes, sir." - - - - - After being continuously hurt, left alone, heart broken and losing the one thing that kept her going, Nia Seymour turns to a new job that will show her how to let loose, live her life and make her happy again. The last thing she expected was to be Taken Captive by someone who would turn her life into chaos, make her addicted to the pain and hold her heart in his hands, breaking it and putting it back together over and over again until she's had enough. • • • The second he lays his eyes on her, Callum Rivera's world is turned upside down and he's made his mind up. She's his. He feeds off of the tears she cries, loves the pain all over her face when he hurts her over and over again, whether it's purposefully or not. As time passes and feelings evolve, soon enough the tears falling out of her eyes no longer give him pleasure, only pain and all he wants is for her to be happy, as long as she's with him. • • • The universe is sending challenge after challenge to these two individuals who want nothing but each other. Will they get past these secrets, lies, toxicity and pain? Or will one of them give up? - - - - -

Amissis Imperium by Phantasmal-wanderer

"I hate you. I hate you so much! You chain me to the table to eat. You chain me to the bed when I sleep. You chain me for anything that takes longer than fifteen fucking minutes!" He stared at me. A growing smile appearing on his face. "I like seeing that I'm in control of you. That there isn't a place that you can run from me. That you will never be able to fight back," I stared back at him, my chest rising up and down as I was trying to control my breathing from my outburst. "That you're mine." Natalie Hunt wanted a nice and quiet senior year after the terrifying events from the summer. After seeing what a monster he was, she had every intention of staying away from her ex-boyfriend, Evan Hale. Evan Hale...had other things in mind for their senior year.

You Belong To Me by damagedemogirl93

"You're mine, and I'm never letting you go." Devon Burke isn't one to be shy to do something drastic and nerve-wracking. He's the bad boy who is constantly in trouble with the law. So, when he leaves his old life behind, he is thrilled to start his new one with new faces. Lailah Woods is excited to start her third year of university and finally earn her nursing degree. She's shy, artistic, and has her longtime best friend Cade Searcy along for the ride. One day, Devon sets his eyes on Lailah and becomes obsessed. Thinking about her day and night. Now, he's curious to know what it is about her that he finds so fascinating. He's determined to find out. Even if it means making Lailah see that they belong together. But, when Devon's obsession gets the best of him and he kidnaps Lailah, she is hell-bent on escaping his captivity. Dead or alive. ----------------- highest ranking: #1 in creep warning: this story contains cussing, obsession, stalking, kidnapping, murder, and sexual assault. reader discretion is advised.

Blood stained love by Layla_book_maker

Beautiful: I wish he would leave me alone and let me live a normal life. But he just can't seem to leave me alone at all. He's always watching. Either it's him, or his team members. Mostly him though, and it's fucking sickening. But yet.. I can't help but fall in love? Mr. Devil: She's beautiful. She is mine. She will be mine, and I don't care if she complains and whines. She. Is. Mine.. WARNING: this contains, dirty scenes, murder, and stalking. If you are under age read at your own risk. I will not be responsible for something I warned you about. Have fun reading 🎉 I also made this book, and if anyone tries to steal it will have consequences.

Lethal Fixation by OmissionSoul

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In Pursuit Of Her (Completed) by Jhoiakpan

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The After Effect by _eMKay

[HIGHEST RANK: #9 in People] "Just because you don't like him back doesn't give him the right to treat you like that." "Sometimes it's so hard for people to accept certain things, that, it just drives them off the cliff." "Even until the end, you're saying no... I guess this is why I liked you so much." "SHUT THE DOOR!!" "One of us isn't going to leave here at all. One of us will have to be carried out." "If you're going to be like that... then don't even think of coming near her." "It'll be like this from now on. This dark... this quiet... and the last face I'll see... will be yours." Not every crush is innocent. _______________________ Add to your reading list and follow me to get instant updates! Follow Mona, Joseph, and David as they go through the weekend of a lifetime and begin to see the world in a different way.

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Perfect Storm by JeniRaeD

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You Are Ours

IF YOU ARE NOT OVER 18YRS OLD - THIS STORY IS NOT FOR YOU! At thirteen Ryan Blake moves to California from London, England. Her dad gets a new promotion so that means her whole life has to move across to the other side of the world to his new job; a new job for him - a new school, new friends & new enemies for her. Her family love the idea of a new life in a different country but not Ryan. She's shy, withdrawn & hates meeting new people. When she's introduced to the new family next door, Mrs Greyson introduces her eldest son, Noah but then mentions her two other children & she calls the "her terrors". The thought of living next door to two siblings, who even their mother calls terrors freights her & makes her feel uneasy. But Ryan never expected the Greyson brothers to be the the older brother companionship she didn't know she needed. They are more than close, despite the five & six year age gap between them. They care for her like family & are always there for her no matter what, they just want what's best for her. When she returns from college a few years later, after not being home for two years the boys are no longer boys, they are now both men & now Ryan is too no longer a girl - blossomed into a beautiful young women, the brothers see how far she has come from being the shy teenager next door, to a beautiful, young, confident women. A women they have both loved for years. A women they both want. A women that they claim as 'Ours'. "Patience princess, we both want a taste, the more we tease you, the wetter you are... the better you'll taste," Nico says, his wet hot tongue tracing a line up my throat. I look at him with confusion & watch as his hand trails down the rest of me, tugging at the band of my panties. "W-we?" I whisper. "You didn't think I'd let him have all the fun alone, did you beautiful?" Nates voice says. I look to the left of me & there he is - Nate, laying down with his elbow propped up supporting him while he watches Rank- *1 #share