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Complete, First published Oct 13, 2013
Hey there! This is another one of my (icecube#1) competition pieces :) It was written in P6 so pardon if it isn't that good haha. sooooooo take a look yeah? and feel free to comment on my writing and give me feedback :)
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icecube#1 <3
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