Flawless In His Eyes {Completed}
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  • Parts 22
  • Time 6h 30m
Complete, First published Nov 10, 2016
Would you trust someone whom you've known for a day?

Blaze has found herself in the wrong territory whilst on the run from her past, but something or rather someone is keeping her there. Is her guaranteed safety worth the pain that lies ahead of her?

Only time will tell.



...



Some people have hope that the person causing them pain will change one day and stop. 

I am not one of those people. 

I don't deserve this abuse and I know for a fact that the person inflicting the pain will never change. 

I'm Blaze Crystal Raymond and I'll set fire to his reign. He'll perish in the flames of my fury.

... But first I need to escape.

And find a witch to do the whole fire thing. 

*_*_*_*

This isn't a story about abuse. It's about healing and finding your place in the world and being happy within yourself.

*_*_*_*

This is a story about someone, but it's not who you think. 

Blaze may be the narrator, but the real main character is hidden. 

See if you can guess whose story this really is.
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