Pack or Pride? (Slowly updating/editing)

Pack or Pride? (Slowly updating/editing)

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Seventeen year old Stone Ragshale has lived in Texas almost her whole life. When she moves schools, she meets new friends -and enemies- and begins to find out who and what she really is. When a dangerous and dark family secret threatens to surface and put everyone she loves in danger, she has no choice but to leave her home on a journey to save herself and the people she loves. 8/5/2021 Author's note, please read!!! I am rewriting this book almost completely. I look back on how it was written when I started almost five years ago, and the amount of cringe is otherworldly. I don't want to subject my readers to that lol! The main plot will be the same, so if y'all have read up to chapter 23 before August of 2021, the same stuff happens in a different way. I am going to tweak some chapters and completely rewrite others, so please bear with me! The main character's name is changing from Stone Ragshale to Fallon Stark. I'm keeping her personality and physical appearance the same. I'll also be adding more depth to all of the characters since they're basically cookie cutter stereotypes right now. Please, feel free to correct my grammar or spelling if you think something is wrong! I appreciate any suggestions y'all have as well. Happy reading!
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A parody... except it slowly gets less satirical as I get way too attached to the characters and turn the story into a shipping-fest ~~~~ "Why are you doing this?" I whispered. He slammed me against another locker. I could see anger, sadness, envy, happiness and lust in his teal green orbs. "Because you're mine." He smirked, gnashing his teeth against mine. ~~~~ Brynn Winters is a 17 year old good girl. She is sweeter than sugar. She is also sarcastic and quirky and innocent and naive and snarky and is a bookworm and not like other girls. She also has trauma to (barely) compensate for her lack of personality. She believes in love but she has never experienced any, until she met him. Ryder Daniels is a 18 year old bad boy. He is sweeter than sin. He is dark and mysterious and plays football (not shown in book). He smokes and drinks beer. He is a ladies' man and a player. He has walls around his heart and some dark secrets that is definitely not spoiled in the title. He does not believe in love. Brynn and Ryder are opposites. So what happens when they meet? He is not who she thinks he is. Will it end in disaster? Or will it end in love? Will it end in flames? Or will it end in a different kind of flame? As disasters come their way, will they choose love or not love? Will their secrets drive them apart? Or will they trust in each other? Join them on their journey of love. There will be love, annoying sluts, conversations that doesn't pass the Bechdel test, cliche tropes, glaring plot holes, subtly glaring plot holes, socialism, orbs, humor, secondhand embarrassment and the tiniest hints of homoeroticism. ~~~~ Reviews (aka criticisms that I'm too lazy to correct): "From a horribly done parody to horribly done leftist propaganda." "Brynn and Ryder are the most frustrating couple I've ever read." "Where humor" "You can't use parody as an excuse for bad writing, you know."

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