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Random Oneshots by Dhgejnd

This is a story with random oneshots based off of prompts. Sometimes starter ideas are here too. Completely open to feedback! *The photos are grabs off the internet and if you find out who made them, comment it please The photos also have like nothing to do with the story sometimes

✮ ꜱᴀʟʟʏ ꜰᴀᴄᴇ x ʀᴇᴀᴅᴇʀ ✮ by ThatOneSafe_Corner

ʏᴏᴜ ɢᴇᴛ ʀᴇɪɴᴄᴀʀɴᴀᴛᴇᴅ ɪɴ ꜱᴀʟʟʏ ꜰᴀᴄᴇ...ᴡʜᴀᴛ ᴄᴏᴜʟᴅ ᴘᴏꜱꜱɪʙʟʏ ɢᴏ ᴡʀᴏɴɢ? ᴛᴡ: ᴄᴜʀꜱɪɴɢ, ꜰᴀɴ ꜱᴇʀᴠɪᴄᴇ, ᴇᴛᴄ. (ᴀʟʟ ʀɪɢʜᴛꜱ ɢᴏ ᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ʀɪɢʜᴛꜰᴜʟ ᴏᴡɴᴇʀ(ꜱ))

••With me•• (Larry X Fem!Reader) by TRENCHUAL

(Y\N) moves to Nockfell, expecting it to be peaceful and not so full of drama and crime. Though, Its the opposite. Opening up hasn't been too easy until you met Larry and Sal, who live in the same apartment complex as you, Sal has a cool prosthetic mask, and he's super chill, Larry is Handsome, Creative, hard-working, and Caring. You think you have a crush on him. (Will not directly be following the Game's storyline, but will use parts of it to reference the time frame) (This is my first fan fiction! Please don't come at me!) Based off the game "Sally Face" by PortableMoose EDIT (APRIL 5TH 2020): This is a FINISHED STORY. I will not be updating it any farther than this. I wrote this in 7th grade months BEFORE chapter 4, so not everything is accurate. But then again this is a fanfic and it doesn't matter LMAO. Thank you for the votes and Reads. I appreciate it!

The blue boy (Sal x Travis) by meowmagica

The same bully at Nockfell high has been tormenting sally for years. He never knew why. Why did he hate him so much? He never understood why the blonde boy hated him so deeply, maybe 𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙙𝙖𝙮 he'll understand Credit for the cover: bublegumun (on instagram) Holy moly 😱 I would also like to mention I do have the right to say any slurs said in the book out of respect I will not be writing any slurs I cannot say so please don't come at me if a slur is said in the book- 💕This story is tons of fluff and angst💕 TWS: This story contains the following, Abuse Physical abuse Drugs Alcohol Emotional abuse Mention of Ed (eating disorders) Scars Violence Bleeding Cussing Slurs Homophobia Sexual abuse Religious trauma (a lot) If any of these are triggering please do not read this for your own safety!

Hey, Pretty Stranger. by SavannahCochrane

"Stay. Away. From. Them." Travis states in the most serious tone he could muster up. Pointing to a brown haired male and another taller boy standing next to him. "But mostly...𝙝𝙞𝙢." He points to the other male beside him - an electric blue haired boy. Y/N L/N had just moved in from California . Ready to begin her new life in north carolina, she meets a ton of new friends along the way with her beautiful and kind personality. But a specific two males being total opposites-- mischievous, rule breakers. She meets the two quite... abruptly. And they just 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚 to tease their new muse. Opposites attract, right? P.S. Sal and Larry do act quite a bit out of character, BECAUSE I am only using the characters and some of the lore in my book, but their personalities and everything else is just spontaneously made up by me! Sal Fisher x reader x Larry Johnson ⚠️UNDER EDITING, but it should be meh for now 👍 Watty's 2023 nominee! *+:｡.｡　⋆★⋆　｡.｡:+* #1 : Maplecohen 7/14/22 #1 : LarryJohnson 7/14/22 #1 : Chugcohen 7/14/22 #27 : Toddmorrison 7/14/22 #1: Sallyface 11/25/22 #1 : Henryfisher 7/17/22 #32 : Ashleycampbell 7/18/22 #1 : Lisajohnson 7/19/22 #1 : Sallyfacegame 7/22/22 #1 : Sallyfacexreader 7/24/22 #52 : xreader 10/29/22 #2 : SalFisher 2/10/23

Cigarette And Lavender || under editing || Salvis || Sally Face || by httpsolivierstars

"Its just I hate myself sometimes and I really hate how I act. I'm so fucking mean to everyone, especially you and your friends, and I guess it's because your happy and I'm not. I've been jealous of you since you got here. Your perfect." "I've never been perfect, no one is. I just know which parts of myself to hide and which parts to show." ~ Travis Phelps was never much of a social person. Never had any real friends. Never had a real support system. That was until him and Sal Fisher form an unlikely friendship that makes Travis question his life and everything about it. ~ 18/41 chapters edited ~ TWs Psychical/verbal Abuse Drugs Mentions of Alcohol Implied eating disorders Religious Trauma Homophobia Slurs Suicidal thoughts/ideation (Rated mature for the above, No smut/NSFW) ~ 3/13/2023 - 8/3/2024 ~ Ranked 3 in #salvis as of 11/21/24 ~ I Can't find the credits to the cover send them to me if you know them. ~ Inspired by @Snopera 'Butterfly Weed'

CNCO IMAGINES AND PREFERENCES ( completed) by -jadesyscupcake

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Your dream self by _Inkwoven_Tales_

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Things We Wish We Had Said Or Did. by Rott_X3

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Sally Face X Reader // Oneshots And Lemons by Riikira

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The blue boy (Sal x Travis) cover

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Cigarette And Lavender || under editing || Salvis || Sally Face || cover

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Random Oneshots

This is a story with random oneshots based off of prompts. Sometimes starter ideas are here too. Completely open to feedback! *The photos are grabs off the internet and if you find out who made them, comment it please The photos also have like nothing to do with the story sometimes