The Boy At The Bus Stop

The Boy At The Bus Stop

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"Ok bye Aunt " I say ,unprepared for the weather. "Bye Sweetie" My aunt says. I walk into the cold, fall weather of Chicago and all I want is to hurry to school. Turning to the number to bus stop,I see a teenage boy. He's crying, tears sheddingn down his eyes as I walk closer.I want to ask .Gaining courage Im closer enough to talk to the guy."Hey" I say.He looks up, for the first time and I see his face.The boy has a scar on his left eye brow with hair covering it.High cheek bones, warm brown eyes, and pink,darking lips -he smokes.Hes not black,not fully at least,nor white,he's Hispanic.I guess I was looking to long because he coughed. "Hi" he says. "Im Xander , Are you okay?" I speak. "Im ky..." before he can even resond the bus comes. For the first time,I was willing to be cold for a response.
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Completed, but under editing and rewriting. Situation and diction may change, but not the storyline or character. *** "W-when d-did t-they b-build a w-w all on t-the h-hallway?" I asked no one in particular. I rubbed my head with my eyes shut to ease the pain that shot through my head. The sound of laughter made me freeze with my hand on my head. I opened my eyes, slowly. Three handsome boys were staring at me. No, two of the boys were trying to stifle a smile while one of the boys was staring blankly at me. Rude much? It seemed he was the one I hit and not a wall. Thanks Mary for stating the obvious. I stared at his chest probably because he was taller than I am and I had to look up to meet his face. His abs were visible through the blue shirt he wore. Staring at abs in this situation. Oh God! I'm weird. "First you get to be called a wall, interesting. And now, she is checking you out. It isn't fair. Why do you always get the beautiful ones?" One of the boys groaned. I blushed. I was checking a guy out. Wait, What? Did I just blush? Kill me! "I- I m seery, I debt mean to hat you." What did I just say? This couldn't get any worse. The boys looked shocked even the mute handsome boy looked a little bit surprised. Why did I keep calling him handsome? "I-I'm s-sorry I h-hit you, I d-didn't mean to," that sounded better. "Oh," one of the boys said. Oh! Indeed. I was expecting a reply, but the handsome boy in front of me refused to talk. Is he dumb or deaf? "I am Tom. And I am not dumb nor deaf," he said and walked away. I didn't say that aloud, did I? Guess I did. "You did, baby girl," one of the two boys said an. He waved at me dragging his smirking friend with him. That was embarrassing.

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