My Ethalled: Super powers[ON GOING MAJOR EDITING]

My Ethalled: Super powers[ON GOING MAJOR EDITING]

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MAJOR EDITING PLOT CHANGING A LOT IS CHANGING Basically I decided I didn't like it so I'm changing it because there are too many plot holes and an unnecessary amount of characters. It's taking a long time but will say once it's done! Edit: yeah ^ that was like a year ago I doubt I'll ever finish this Read at your own risk if you want ---------------- ((Book 1)) The year is 2289, and, just seventeen years prior, the only power station containing a new type of radiation, Ethall, exploded, contaminating everyone who surrounded it within a 150,000 mile radius. When the radiation leaked, anyone contaminated instantly dropped dead. The explosion killed first hundreds, then thousands. The death toll rose every day. 5000 dead, 7000 dead. Humans were almost at the brink of extinction! Babies born in the center of this chaos, for some reason, didn't die. They lived and became immune. Immune to the deadliest radiation ever known to man. All the immune newborns were collected from their dying mothers and were used to begin rebuilding the new human population. They were all dumped in either section X or Y. These sections are run by the few remaining immune adults. But as the children hit the age of twelve some strange abilities began to occur. Had the radiation caused some kind of mutation in the brain? Every single immune child developed an power named after the radiation that caused it - an Ethalled. All apart from one. Autumn Oakworth. 》》》》》《《《《《 Highest Rank: #908 in Fantasy Sparkling Awards Fantasy Winner 2017 ☆Very nearly completed☆ ☆will be rewriting the first few chapters☆ ☆please Vote and comment, criticism is welcome☆ Currently being edited for clarity!
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