Ramayana Retold - Shivam's Romantic Version
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  • Reads 39,010
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  • Parts 28
  • Time 7h 4m
Shivam030291
Ongoing, First published Nov 13, 2016
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Hi guys
  This is Shivam , I Like writing a lot of Ramayana Fics , specially about Lakshmila , 
  
  Here is a story I have been Writing , Its just my own version with major deviations from Ramayan Plot , Its just meant to be written as a fantasy, Do Enjoy
  
  Presenting the Couples
  
  Ram - Sita ( Sira )
  Lakshman - Urmila ( Lakshmila )
  Bharat Mandavi  ( Bharma )
  Shatrughan Shrutkirti ( Shatkirti )
  Megnath Sulochana ( MegNa )


However the Main focus will be my Favourite Lakshmila


Other Supporting  Roles  :

Raavan
Mandodari
Atikay
Kumbhkaran
Vasuki
Yakshi
Vishwamitra
Ksheera
Shesha
Vashistha
Shukracharya
Indra
Hanuman
Angad
Vali
Sugreeva




COVER PIC CREDITS TO MY SISTER  - Phenomenal_W
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Lakshman's Daughter

46 parts Complete Mature

Featured on ASIAN FANTASY Featured on HISTORICAL FICTION Queen Sita ends her life as she becomes unable to tolerate the bad-mouthing and injustice rendered to her by her own people. Months after Queen Sita's tragic demise, her sister, Urmila gives birth to a baby girl. Fear grips Urmila's heart. The question of her daughter being subjected to the same injustice and unfair treatment her sister underwent is raised. Urmila's husband, Lakshman promises that he will raise his daughter into a confident warrior princess who will rise against injustice. * * * * * * * Lakshman's Daughter is a family adventure of a young girl growing up in a male dominated society to stand against all the injustice inflicted upon women. The story is packed with action, romance, family sentiment and adventure.

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