LOOKING PRETTY
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Last published Wed, Nov 16, 2016
Nia-Ree Allen, a 27 yr. old Gal owns a bar and is a successful lawyer and writer, artist, gardener and archer. The bar is losing customers because the bartenders are just her 2 bland cousins, working for her. So, she searches for some spirit in a body.
She meets 5 women, who all seem worthy of a spot.
Caramelle Vera, a 27 yr old girl is K-POP obsessed, plays video games, will be mature when she needs to, swears alot and has a ton of spirit.
Sandra Cassell, a 22 yr old girl, is best friends with Caramelle and is a real Brainiac. She's not really a tank full of energy, but she is really alluring and beautiful.
Jullie Anders, a 21 yr. old kawaii induced gal is very playful and loves anime and all things cute and pastel.
Corona Sandridge, a 23 yr. old is very fashionable and is also a strategic person, she is also smart. She's really pretty, and knows every way in the book to get a guy.
Cinnamon Warren, a 24 yr old girl is like the oldest mature sister. She is really the cook.
But something happens to Nia and Carmelle.
Something melting.
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This was inspired by a line from Closer, "looking pretty in a hotel bar."
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