LOOKING PRETTY

LOOKING PRETTY

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Nia-Ree Allen, a 27 yr. old Gal owns a bar and is a successful lawyer and writer, artist, gardener and archer. The bar is losing customers because the bartenders are just her 2 bland cousins, working for her. So, she searches for some spirit in a body. She meets 5 women, who all seem worthy of a spot. Caramelle Vera, a 27 yr old girl is K-POP obsessed, plays video games, will be mature when she needs to, swears alot and has a ton of spirit. Sandra Cassell, a 22 yr old girl, is best friends with Caramelle and is a real Brainiac. She's not really a tank full of energy, but she is really alluring and beautiful. Jullie Anders, a 21 yr. old kawaii induced gal is very playful and loves anime and all things cute and pastel. Corona Sandridge, a 23 yr. old is very fashionable and is also a strategic person, she is also smart. She's really pretty, and knows every way in the book to get a guy. Cinnamon Warren, a 24 yr old girl is like the oldest mature sister. She is really the cook. But something happens to Nia and Carmelle. Something melting. READ!!!!!!! This was inspired by a line from Closer, "looking pretty in a hotel bar."
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This is all written by me. MINE! The pics of landscape are mine the rest I googled. When the female silhouette walked out from the shadows shock and fear rolled off me. It was her, the evil woman from my nightmares! With her walking towards us I could feel how evil she was. That's weird, I can feel her evil, how? When Lachlan called her his beloved my heart shattered. Lachlan and the woman who is Gilda his beloved, locked eyes. A heavy weight seemed like it was crushing me. I was suffocating. I had to get out of there and away from her, from them. Lachlan is a 962 year old vampire that is tired of being alone in a world full of humans. Going to extremes to not be alone. After another failed attempt has him running in frustration where he stumbles on a scent he has to find. He's wishing for death, and having no regard for life when he smells the most wonderful smell. He follows the smell and He finds a 5 year old little girl and he's hungry! And then his heartbeats 💗 for the first time in hundreds of years, since he was turned, why??? Why did the Vampires heartbeat 💓? He's determined to find out. Ava is a 5 year old little girl living with her grandmother in a small Missouri town. On her way to the pool for her swimming lessons she notices a stranger. Ava being the sweet little girl that she is offers the stranger help. Give it a chance please!!! There are different time periods through out the story and I tried to choose music for those time periods that reflect upon the chapter. Please constructive criticism only, negative mean people can kick rocks. Warning ⚠️ ⚠️ Adult language, Adult content, violence, abuse. The MC's relationship is bxg, interracial relationships in the story. I am beyond racial or sexual orientation FYI. ⚠️There are some religious references. This is how the female Mc was raised to believe and add realism to the story. Believe in whatever you want or don't it's up to you.⚠️ Enjoy! Un-Edited!

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