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Eyes Wide Open

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❝The sight stained my eyes.
 My arms were held behind me.
The screams were loud.
It was pure chaos.
I thrived in chaos.
One moment I was restrained, the next I was out and slashing.   
He was innocent.
He was innocent and young.
Too young for the skies, too young for the gods.
Too young for death. ❞
Where a young girl witnesses the start of a war, and the downfall of her brother. 

A divergent fan fiction
Most of all the rights belong to Veronica Roth, though you already knew that.
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lovely cover by @honeyurisAll Rights Reserved

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Ambivalence [p.h.] - EDITING by overzealous-jealous

book one of the ambivalence trilogy I look at him. "I don't want to kill anyone either. Trust me. But I'd do it if it would make you feel better." He pulls me to a stop near the railing of the chasm. The Pit's glass ceiling is letting through rays of dusk, with mesmerizing rays of oranges and pinks lighting up the otherwise blackened stone. I can't focus on anything else though; Peter's eyes are too intense. They're like green lasers burning into my cerulean sea irises, like the sun reaching through a lens to start a fire. "Jax." I tear my eyes away. "Four told me you heard," I blurt out. "What I said in my fear landscape." "I did," Peter confirms. I squeeze my eyes shut and wait for the storm to pass. "Why do you seem so scared? Do I scare you, Jax?" "No," I breathe. ||all rights go to Veronica Roth for the divergent series, with the exception of a few characters|| Highest rankings: #1 in #candor, #4 in #four, #1 in #veronicaroth, #2 in #hayes, #4 in #factions, #5 in #trisprior

Infallible by DivergentlyYours

RANKED #1-Divergent as of 1-29-2019!!! Thank you, wonderful readers 🖤 Rae lay on the stiff mattress, unmoving. She stared up at the white ceiling, imagining what the seconds, minutes and hours would sound like as they rushed by. Time was such a strange thing. One moment you can feel as if there's too much of it, and in the next moment there's not enough. Time probably passes silently for a reason. If it made a sound it would probably be unpleasant. A constant screaming reminder of the moments that were wasted, taken for granted, stolen away or lost. A raging celebration of the moments that were precious, intimate and full. It would probably be too loud for a person's ears to handle, and we would crumble under the pressure. ***Intended for adults only! The Divergent story and many characters belong to the wonderful Veronica Roth! I hope you like the story. I've pulled together things from both the book and movie, and put a lot of effort into referencing both to make the story flow. Also, in this story the initiates are 18 when the choosing ceremony takes place. Let me know what you think, but please be nice!***

Aberrant by squirrelmonkey123

'The opposite for courage is not cowardice, it is conformity. Even a dead fish can go with the flow.' -Jim Hightower In a society divided into five factions, two girls must make a choice. Amity-born April Dexter 'Dex' Meadows has always known that she's different from the other Amity kids. She'd get into fights when provoked rather than staying calm. She'd climb scarily high in the trees rather than playing on the ground. And she'd find them and their games boring. Being told she was Divergent wasn't exactly a shock. But for Brooke Kang, on the other hand, the daughter of the Candor representative who's always done her best to fit in, it is. Being Divergent doesn't just mean you're different. It's dangerous and the penalty for not conforming is death. Two girls from two very different factions must make a choice. But where one will try to hide her Divergence, the other will simply be herself. Which way is the 'right' way to be Divergent? And will both girls survive? All rights go to Veronica Roth. Any feedback is welcome :-) (Takes place 3 years before the Divergent series).

The Chasm by KaseyJessup8

17 year old Delilah became a member of dauntless last year. This new year, she is a leader. One of the initiates-an erudite transfer- has an inkling towards her. Eric Coulter. As he pushes her buttons, he falls more and more in love with her. But does she fall in love with him? Who knows? All Four novels (and movies + ascendent) of divergent will be combined into one for my novel. All rights and original characters are owned by Veronica Roth. Other characters are owned by me. I use some parts from the novels and some parts from the movie. *Let me know if there's anything you would like me to do differently or to give me some tips I would appreciate it!*

Dauntless Initate ||Eric Coulter|| by Aspiring-Writer14

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The Transfer (A Divergent backstory to Eric) by DivergentObsessed93

This is a backstory for Eric. I've taken bits and pieces from the Divergent series and also the movie. I also used the book about Four that recently came out. It takes you through his journey through initiation on in to leadership. He also develops a love interest that isn't in either the books or the movie. I wanted him to have a softer side that only she'll see. You can see the characters on my polyvore site: http://www.polyvore.com/characters_in_my_story/set?id=133809746 Please comment your thoughts and ideas I would love to hear any feedback you have, this is the first story I've written. Enjoy!

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"Please, Grace let me explain. I-",he starts. But i interrupt him. "Theres nothing to explain Eric. You've had to choose. Either helping me, or obeying my mom. You've made your choice, and it's fine.", i pause, "i just wish it would have been different." Grace Mattews. Star daughter of Jeanine. Top student. Erics Best friend. First female Dauntless leader. Four's mentor. Also, loving sister, traitor, Divergent. After desperately trying to blend into the dauntless lifestyle, hiding her divergence from both Dauntless and her childhood friend Eric, but failing, she is forced to flee and leave everything she loves behind. Running into Evelyn, factionless leader, and combining forces they build an army to take down Jeanines newly build Army of mindless warriors. What happens when she suddenly runs into her old friends who once turned against her and one of them being Eric?

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Eric's Sister by DionneFoley

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Ambivalence [p.h.] - EDITING

book one of the ambivalence trilogy I look at him. "I don't want to kill anyone either. Trust me. But I'd do it if it would make you feel better." He pulls me to a stop near the railing of the chasm. The Pit's glass ceiling is letting through rays of dusk, with mesmerizing rays of oranges and pinks lighting up the otherwise blackened stone. I can't focus on anything else though; Peter's eyes are too intense. They're like green lasers burning into my cerulean sea irises, like the sun reaching through a lens to start a fire. "Jax." I tear my eyes away. "Four told me you heard," I blurt out. "What I said in my fear landscape." "I did," Peter confirms. I squeeze my eyes shut and wait for the storm to pass. "Why do you seem so scared? Do I scare you, Jax?" "No," I breathe. ||all rights go to Veronica Roth for the divergent series, with the exception of a few characters|| Highest rankings: #1 in #candor, #4 in #four, #1 in #veronicaroth, #2 in #hayes, #4 in #factions, #5 in #trisprior