Cara

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Hellooo,
Okay get ready to cringe. So this is a story I wrote about a year back for a commonwealth competition thing. I didn't get a place lmaooo but I was mentioned and I came 'highly commended' and I was well happy with that pahahaha. I read through this and I was wondering how on EARTH did this manage to get a mention but I thought I'd post it so you guys can hopefully notice the change in my writing when I write a few short stories in the coming future. Tell me in the comments if you can see a slight difference (I'm kinda hoping someone comments bc this story is terrible pahahaha)
Ps: I haven't changed ANYTHING on this story except I took out the word 'lowkey' bc I didn't think it was appropriate so please don't come for me bc it's bad pahaga. Also if you're EVER feeling like this then please, please talk to someone x