
Please read description :) Hellooo, Okay get ready to cringe. So this is a story I wrote about a year back for a commonwealth competition thing. I didn't get a place lmaooo but I was mentioned and I came 'highly commended' and I was well happy with that pahahaha. I read through this and I was wondering how on EARTH did this manage to get a mention but I thought I'd post it so you guys can hopefully notice the change in my writing when I write a few short stories in the coming future. Tell me in the comments if you can see a slight difference (I'm kinda hoping someone comments bc this story is terrible pahahaha) Ps: I haven't changed ANYTHING on this story except I took out the word 'lowkey' bc I didn't think it was appropriate so please don't come for me bc it's bad pahaga. Also if you're EVER feeling like this then please, please talk to someone xSeluruh Hak Cipta Dilindungi Undang-Undang
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