vial [working title]

vial [working title]

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Mystery
there was a group of rogue scientist. they created a formula that would give whoever owns it, the chance to take over the world and change everything. but then one of the scientists steals it and destroys it. all seems lost, the world is save, or is it? my first story, thought i'd put up the prologue and see the reactions, if people like it i shall continue
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Altered

Before you read any of this, please know that I hate how I wrote this book and there's are major plot holes. I want to rewrite it but I can't find any motivation. I wouldn't suggest reading if you can't stand a couple confusing parts. Also there's supposed to be a sequel but this book was so shitty I can't stand to make one. ~~~~~~~~ "I never thought that something as simple as choosing to walk home instead of getting a ride would change my life so drastically." ------- Charisma Jones was just another kid who never spoke out. She wasn't shy, nor was she outspoken. She kept to herself. She was stepped on at school and bullied by those who thought she was "weird" or "a freak". She allowed them to do it, not wanting to draw anymore attention to herself. She was fine with her life how it was. But it all changed the night she left the party without a ride. ------- "I sped up walking when the car slowed down beside me. When it stopped fully I started panicking. I sprinted down the street enveloped in darkness. I thought I lost the creepy car when I heard a pop and felt a stab of pain in my side. Looking down I saw the bright feathers of a dart and my vision turned black." ------- She was altered. Now, she's back with a grudge to all those people who were cruel to her and this time, she not going to back down.

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