The Colorless
- Reads 634
- Votes 124
- Parts 5
Ongoing29m
Last published Sat, Jan 7, 2017
The Colorless was previous known as A World Divided In Two
(Not very fast updates!)
"I must say, you have a great plot for this story and your writing is doing complete justice to it. The suspense filled ending of the first chapter is a good idea to make me, as a reader, continue reading so keep that up!" - @fanna-tastic
"I like the suspense in the story as everyone awaits anxiously what her fate is.... LOVE IT" - @king1905Flair
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Growing up in the dystopian country of Altheria, seventeen-year-old Zaylee Embers finally turns into an adult on her eighteenth birthday. But, turning into an adult in Altheria doesn't mean freedom, it means the exact opposite.
For years she has grown up in the Cobalt side of Altheria - that is where everything she knows is, her family, friends, and life. But as soon as her Placement is chosen, she is devastated.
It is the government's way of keeping the people of Altheria from going into chaos.
But, she starts to figure out lies in the system one by one with the help of Arlow, a pure breed Jade. They come up with a plan to rebel and to recruit people. They become The Colorless.
How will Zaylee Embers ever survive the land she once knew as great? Will they be able to escape this place before all hell breaks lose? And most of all, how will she prevent herself from falling in love with a Jade?
To find out more, please read The Colorless
Cover by @sereneur
Rated #693 in Science Fiction within the first week of being published!
Rated #459 in Science Fiction on January 5th of 2017!
Rated #411 in Science Fiction on January 8th of 2017!
Rated #341 in Science Fiction on January 9th of 2017!
All Rights Reserved
#49
youngadultfantasy
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
You may also like
The Painting
"It took me five seconds to fall. The impact on my chest jarring my body but not my mind. I suppose this is the point where your life is supposed to flash before your eyes as time itself freezes - and it did in a way. But I didn't relive my life physically like walking through an old memory, déjà vu in each step. It was a feeling, something that started in my chest and spread to my fingertips, one so unique to me that it encapsulated each significant event into one single second." For as long as May can remember one mystery has haunted her world. A dirty window before her, the grim obstructing her vision, she has lived with a loss she can't identify - that is until one rainy night. Gradually the spots of dirt May scratched at for so long wipe away with the touch of a finger. But when she looks in will she like what she sees - or will curiosity kill the cat?Complete
Adjustable World: Tefter
In the cursed world of Eden, every individual is born with an anomaly-an uncontrollable power that can be either a fortifiable quirk or a catastrophic force. The Source, a powerful research organization, led by a prophesied Demigod girl, has long kept dangerous anomalies in check, but it easily gets overpowered when a mysterious virus emerges, transforming humans into omnipotent, soulless entities. The selfish government and powerhouses use this chance to ostracize the prophesied girl to reside far beyond the border and destroy the Source. Decades later, Zafer joins a new uprising faction, seeking nothing but recognition in the world with no restrictions. During his quest for strength, Zafer accidentally becomes a pivotal player in bringing about a new world order, one that will alter the fate of Eden forever. As Zafer rises, he finds himself allied with- and opposed to- the most formidable humans and god-like entities the world has ever seen. Through shocking revelations, clashes with power beyond imagination, and belief-challenging events, Zafer must discover his true purpose and identity in a world on the brink of transformation. Will he become a hero, a villain, or join with the prophesied girl? Yooo everyone! This novel is a story I've been structuring for over 5 years now, and after writing from scratch 4 times, I'm finally somewhat self-confident enough to publish it! THERE ARE NO FILLER CHAPTERS! Each chapter is mostly a combination of action and World Building/ Character development, and sometimes only one of the two! I pondered a lot wile constructing the story in order to avoid repetitions in the story, so each action scene and plot twist is unique in it's own way! As mentioned, the only thing that's distorting my confidence are my writing skills, so PLEASE LEAVE A FEEDBACK. This is crucial for my improvement as I would love to turn this novel into a manga. App. length 150 ch
White Lies (Book 1)
Jesabel is a liar. When her only friend mysteriously disappears, she does what comes naturally. She keeps her truth from the world. Without warning, she is thrown into a web of lies far more dangerous and lethal than anything she could imagine. With an annoyingly charming boy by her side, can she unravel what she refuses to tell - the truth? WHITE LIES HAS BEEN REVISED, EDITED AND REWORKED! Happy late new year, friends! I'd like to take this opportunity to announce that White Lies, a story that has been up and running on Wattpad since 2011, has been re-written and revised for the coming decade. What does this mean? This entails the same characters you know and love, with better flow, better writing, more nuanced character development, more mature content, and entirely different plot lines. Jesabel's character has changed drastically since I last introduced her to the world (nearly NINE years ago! yikes!), and I wanted to make this story a more nuanced and modern take. When I had written White Lies, I had been just 14 years old. And I've done a ton of growing, learning, and unlearning over the years. This means that my characters have grown and developed with me. If you are an old friend and re-reader - welcome, and please enjoy the same old story you love with a brand new take! If you have started along this White Lies journey beginning in December and all throughout January, you might have read a half-edited and half-original version of the story. So please feel free to re-read at your leisure! I won't bite, I promise.Complete
THE FROSTMOON PROPHECIES: Dark Bane Alliance (Book 2)
Book 2. Aliana Scott has been forced into a world and life she never expected. Meeting her wolf was supposed to help give her answers to the voids she felt were missing in her life, but instead, has only created more questions and problems. Betrayed by the adults she trusted her entire life, she's dictated into an arranged mating with the Dark Bane Pack's soon-to-be alpha, Jesse Summers. She'd only just started exploring love to find out that her heart has connected with several hearts. Will this alliance be worth not having the freedom to be with whomever she chooses? What kind of person is she being mated to? That's not all. Aliana and her wolf are in danger! Because of The FrostMoon Prophecies and recent visions, she is sought out by many. Why are they seeking her? Who tried to kill her? What's so special about her wolf? Who's a friend, and who's a foe? The TOP SECRET Aegis Group and their Aegis Elite are training with her to protect the Golden Princess, Orla, her wolf... at least this is what they're led to believe... Her life: Confusing love life that never ends, new capabilities & strengths, pushing herself to the limits finding herself as she changes while everyone changes around her too, And why can't she seem to stop feeling like there's more to her life than she remembers? Content 📋 Humor/Funny Plot twists & Revenge & Betrayals & Lies & Heartbreak & Backstabbing & Loneliness & Danger Destiny Prophecies Predictions Multiple love Interests Friends to Lovers Enemies to Lovers Young Adult Romance Love Soulmates Mates Best friends Childhood friends New Friends Magic Powers Abilities Gifts Paranormal Gods Goddesses Wolves Witches & More Content Warning ⚠️ Mature audiences only Language Smut Content Intense Situations Violence AlianaScott CalvinKellyJr MasonKelly MichelleKelly LukeScott AdrianHart JesseSummers #AriBlack CooperONeal ReneeArcana MercedesMalvado JennaSummers RobbieMasters
Tomorrow's Blues
~"You don't- you don't need me." I stared in shock. This was the first shred of emotion he'd shown since he started avoiding me, and I had no idea how to respond. What was I supposed to say to something like that? So I let myself be honest, and I told him exactly how I felt. "But I do." I almost choked on my words. "I do need you. I can't talk to anybody else. I can't eat. I can't sleep. And I know you know what that's like."~ Liliana is now an orphan. Just 17 years old, she lost her parents in a boating accident and now she must live with her best friend, her best friend's parents and her best friend's brother, Joseph. She struggles through her grief as well as dealing with the mysterious but obnoxious Joseph, and it soon comes to light that he isn't the only one around her keeping secrets. Living under the same roof, tensions arise, and Liliana begins to discover that a perfect family may not be so perfect after all." If you like a good old slowburn, enemies (ish) to lovers, bonding over tragic backstories type beat then this story is for you, I promise :) #1 in #bestfriendsbrother (didn't note the exact date - some time in January 2021) #1 in #dealing with death (11/04/21) amazing cover by @sixty6ix !!Complete
The Confined
☆A WATTPAD FEATURED STORY - October 2017☆ ★Highest ranking in adventure: #81 ★Winner of the 2017 Sparkling awards! Action/Adventure 1st place! ★Winner of the booklovers story writing contest! ★Winner of 'Serious Talk' in Action/Adventure of the Unknown Writers awards! Do you know what it's like to be trapped in a paradox? Ego is tired of his life going on the same routine everyday, but he has taken it in as his fate. However, as he meets the girl from the RL, Violet, he recognizes his true feelings about the injustice of society and starts to take actions for the rights of the Confined. His potential is awaken, and as he goes on a dangerous quest to help Violet, he discovers hidden secrets of his past. On his quest, he is threatened and challenged by the RL officials who know his weak spot, his loved ones. Will he be able to keep his loved ones safe, much less himself? Do you know what it's like to plummet down from the top to the bottom in a blink of an eye? Violet is happy. Her life is perfect because she has all she needs, and all she wants. That is until her life plummets to the bottom. Because of her father's choice, she is taken to the Confined. Taken everything away from her, Violet resists from following the rules of the Confined and refuses to cooperate. She is helped by a boy that has been in the Confined from the start, and decides that she will one day free the Confined from their burden and pain. Will she adapt to the Confined, or continue to rebel till the end?Complete
Colors
Locked away in society cut off from the rest of the world, 16 year old Clarity suspects nothing. Each 16 year old is assigned a color, but if you get Gray, you are executed. Clarity knows above everything she will be Yellow. Being part of an "Upper" family, she has high expectations to reach. But when her ceremony day comes, nothing goes to plan. Her father disappears mysteriously. Her mother disapproves of her every move. Clarity meets a mysterious guy, who is determined to help her escape her dooming fate. How will they escape this society that watches their every move? Will they have a happily ever-after? Read the book to find out!
The Woodlands (#1 THE WOODLANDS SERIES) (COMPLETE)
Rosa never thought she'd make it to sixteen... When being unique puts you in danger and speaking your mind can be punishable by death, you might find yourself fighting to survive. Sixteen-year-old Rosa lives in one of the eight enclosed cities of The Woodlands. Where the lone survivors of a devastating race war have settled in the Russian wilderness because it's the only scrap of land left habitable on the planet. In these circular cities, everyone must abide by the law or face harsh punishment. Rosa's inability to conform and obey the rules brands her a leper and no one wants to be within two feet of her, until she meets Joseph. He's blonde, fair-skinned, green-eyed, and the laid-back complete opposite of Rosa. She's never met anyone quite like him, and she knows that spells danger. But differences weren't always a bad thing. People used to think being unique was one of the most treasured of traits to have. Now, the Superiors, who ruthlessly control the concrete cities with an iron fist, are obsessed with creating a 'raceless' race. They are convinced this is the only way to avoid another war. Any anomalies must be destroyed. The Superiors are unstoppable and can do anything they want. After all, they are considered superheroes by the general public. But not everyone sees them this way. When they continue to abuse their power by collecting young girls for use in their secret, high-tech breeding program, they have no idea that one of those girls has somehow managed to make friends even she didn't know she had. And one man will stop at nothing to save her.Complete
"It took me five seconds to fall. The impact on my chest jarring my body but not my mind. I suppose this is the point where your life is supposed to flash before your eyes as time itself freezes - and it did in a way. But I didn't relive my life physically like walking through an old memory, déjà vu in each step. It was a feeling, something that started in my chest and spread to my fingertips, one so unique to me that it encapsulated each significant event into one single second." For as long as May can remember one mystery has haunted her world. A dirty window before her, the grim obstructing her vision, she has lived with a loss she can't identify - that is until one rainy night. Gradually the spots of dirt May scratched at for so long wipe away with the touch of a finger. But when she looks in will she like what she sees - or will curiosity kill the cat?
More detailsContent Guidelines