The Colorless

The Colorless

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The Colorless was previous known as A World Divided In Two (Not very fast updates!) "I must say, you have a great plot for this story and your writing is doing complete justice to it. The suspense filled ending of the first chapter is a good idea to make me, as a reader, continue reading so keep that up!" - @fanna-tastic "I like the suspense in the story as everyone awaits anxiously what her fate is.... LOVE IT" - @king1905Flair ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Growing up in the dystopian country of Altheria, seventeen-year-old Zaylee Embers finally turns into an adult on her eighteenth birthday. But, turning into an adult in Altheria doesn't mean freedom, it means the exact opposite. For years she has grown up in the Cobalt side of Altheria - that is where everything she knows is, her family, friends, and life. But as soon as her Placement is chosen, she is devastated. It is the government's way of keeping the people of Altheria from going into chaos. But, she starts to figure out lies in the system one by one with the help of Arlow, a pure breed Jade. They come up with a plan to rebel and to recruit people. They become The Colorless. How will Zaylee Embers ever survive the land she once knew as great? Will they be able to escape this place before all hell breaks lose? And most of all, how will she prevent herself from falling in love with a Jade? To find out more, please read The Colorless Cover by @sereneur Rated #693 in Science Fiction within the first week of being published! Rated #459 in Science Fiction on January 5th of 2017! Rated #411 in Science Fiction on January 8th of 2017! Rated #341 in Science Fiction on January 9th of 2017!
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... I didn't know what to do... so I did nothing. There I was, sprawled onto the ground. Just looking at the sky. Wishing... praying... pleading that it would lift me up and take me far away. The bitter air stung my skin like wasps, but still I laid there my legs bare and my body now trembling, did I care though? Would it be so bad for everything to just stop? ___________________________________________ At a young age Zara had entire life was stripped away from her, but she didn't give up she built a new one... only to have that one torn apart as well. It seems everywhere she goes there's trouble lurking around the corner. There's no escape, and no entrance, it only is. Not only is her mate not what she wanted but yet again a curve ball is thrown into the mix leaving Zara's life in jeopardy. What will happen to Zara will she over come this new problem? Will her life ever be normal? Will her mate change? Or better yet does she want him to? A/N: This is my first story I haven't plotted it I'm just writing and seeing where it gets me. May contain swearing and some possible heated scenes, you have been warned!!!

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