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The Colorless
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Ongoing, First published Nov 20, 2016
The Colorless was previous known as A World Divided In Two

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"I must say, you have a great plot for this story and your writing is doing complete justice to it. The suspense filled ending of the first chapter is a good idea to make me, as a reader, continue reading so keep that up!" - @fanna-tastic

"I like the suspense in the story as everyone awaits anxiously what her fate is.... LOVE IT" - @king1905Flair

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Growing up in the dystopian country of Altheria, seventeen-year-old Zaylee Embers finally turns into an adult on her eighteenth birthday. But, turning into an adult in Altheria doesn't mean freedom, it means the exact opposite. 
    For years she has grown up in the Cobalt side of Altheria - that is where everything she knows is, her family, friends, and life. But as soon as her Placement is chosen, she is devastated. 
  It is the government's way of keeping the people of Altheria from going into chaos. 
    But, she starts to figure out lies in the system one by one with the help of Arlow, a pure breed Jade. They come up with a plan to rebel and to recruit people. They become The Colorless.

    How will Zaylee Embers ever survive the land she once knew as great? Will they be able to escape this place before all hell breaks lose? And most of all, how will she prevent herself from falling in love with a Jade?
    
    To find out more, please read The Colorless

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Rated #459 in Science Fiction on January 5th of 2017!
Rated #411 in Science Fiction on January 8th of 2017!
Rated #341 in Science Fiction on January 9th of 2017!
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