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Counting Scars - OUAT
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Complete, First published Nov 21, 2016
[DISCLAIMER] guys I wrote this when I was 14 and I cringe every time I look at it. 

He looks at me, tears continuously falling from his eyes. But the tears seemed to be hot, and made scars in his cheeks as they trickled down. 

"Oh, Peter," I said sorrowfully. 

"Th-the demon.. it doesn't want me to feel p-pain..." He said before yelping. 

"But you can't help that, Peter. You are a human, and humans crash and bleed and feel pain and sorrow. That's one thing you cannot change, and that's one thing a demon cannot change."
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