The makeover
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Candy_obsessed7
Complete, First published Oct 19, 2013
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"You know you still want me." he said cockily.  "As if!" I yelled at him.   "I must say, I like the new look." he all but smirked.  ************************** Alex was the shy, quiet nerd that nobody talked to. Although, she was shy at school she was quit loud, crazy , and pretty sarcastic. She just thought that nobody at school was worth her time.  Damien was your typical cocky jock. He had the girls, the 'followers', and he was the captain of the soccer team.   Now, you're probably wondering how they both fit in to the story. Well, they used to date. It just didn't end well. So, Alex now hates Damien. For the reason that he stole her heart and that he is, as she put it, "an egotistical asshole".  ============================= Ok. So this is my first story I don't know how it will turn out. So, please comment and tell me how you think it's going. Oh and mild language.
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"What do you want now?" she said gritting her teeth as he got closer and closer by every second. "I want nothing else but you Angel..."he whispered, his mouth inches away from her lips. "Can't you see that i don't want you? You're a pervert, a monster, a beast, a freaking werewolf for the love of god!" she screamed, backing away until she touched the wall and froze, realizing there was no way to escape anymore. Taking this as an advantage he slammed his hands on each side of the wall making it harder for her to move, and whispered "That's why you're shutting me out then... Why can't you fucking understand that you're the only girl I want? And you're obviously resisting your feelings towards me, I know you fucking want this shorty." He said before pushing his lips on hers taking her breath away, and her first kiss too... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lorraine Queen, aka Lou, is a 17 years old average girl. She would describe herself in only two words: boring and average. She thinks that no one would fall in love with her because of her average looks and boring personality and she also thinks that she'll never find the right guy, but what if a certain goddess chose to mate her with a certain powerful Alpha? Ryan Ganzhorn, 23 years old, most powerful, fearless, intimidating and sexiest Alpha on this planet, is known for his heartless actions, most difficult decisions and his determination to get everything he wants whenever he wants. Will Lorraine be an easy mate ? or will she make a difficult prey? This story isn't edited yet, but there aren't huge mistakes, just small grammatical ones. (please do not steal my ideas)

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