living with a demon

This story is about a 13 year old girl named Kira (key-ara). Who found someone in the woods injured(Kira was 11 or 10 when she finds him also the reason she thought he was a girl was because of his hair he has really long hair). She finds out that he is homeless and decides that he will live with her. After a while she finds out he's a demon. I will be adding more.and just so we clear (the thick slanted letters are kira )(the thin slanted letters are Kira's mom )( and the norm are kuro's)(koo-ro)=3 and also norm letters are other people. and since this is my first story please let me know if it was good and if I need to fix something. Also feel free to give me some ideas for the story. Thanks.