Out of control
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Last published Wed, Nov 23, 2016
"2 Dead bodies. One mark on both of them. I think....... No not just me........ Everyone who saw them, thinks......... That it is the same killer. What do u make of it ? "
The teenage figure sat cross legged on the sofa. Pondering over the words he had just heard. Unable to move...... But composed. " You my friends........ Have possibly landed yourself in the biggest mishap
Of your life ."
The people standing in front were frozen by the words that emanated so serenely from the person on the sofa.
"Listen carefully............. "
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What happens when the students of St. Thomas high school, witness 2 shocking murders. The shocking part....... They bear the same kill mark.
The same killer? The same weapon? But the most puzzling.......... WHY?
A tale that drives some unfortunate lives to pursue the path of justice and uncover the plot that threatens their very lives.
Little do they know, things will soon go....... OUT OF CONTROL.
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