Bated Breath
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Última publicación mié, nov 23, 2016
THIS IS A ROUGH DRAFT.
I picked up my phone and just started typing. I have done no editing whatsoever. If you notice mistakes or you think I should re-word something , PLEASE, I URGE YOU, point it out to me. tell me where you saw the mistake or how you think it should be changed. If you think I should change the plot, tell me and feel free to give me names. These are not forever. Everything in here will be changed.
Feel free to send me ideas and cover pictures as I still need to find some of my own.
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